Melissa Goode * A Lack of Oxygen
Comments: You truly capture the essence of despair. The grief at a path that wasn’t possible to choose. It ripped at me.
You Have No Right
Comments: Nice walk through the mental anguish and despair of a suicide attempt when there seems no other reasonable option. Nice character connection at the end.
Picture the Scenes
Comments: So many different and bizarre elements that paint such an interesting and really funny picture. I love the ending, bringing it back home. A joy to read.
Enemies are Cool
Comments: Nice character portrayal in a very brief story. You really get a feel for the guy’s narcissim and control issues, which despite his better judgement leads to his ultimate demise. Cool.
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Comments: Very entertaining story! Hooked me in first sentence. Really like the characterization and the bit of mystery. I hope you turn this into a mystery series.
Flying down to Rio
Comments: Excellent portrayal of the mind of a girl that I would say is about 15-16? I see these as beginnings of chapters of a novel. One to start each chapter. Enjoyed it.
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Painting the Town Red
Comments: Nice writing and storytelling skill. Lovely little story.
Cam king of light
Comments: Wonderful skill at describing characters. Extremely funny. Jarring elements work very well.
Comments: Beautiful writing, suspensful story and nice descriptions. Would make a great book.
Charles Robert Hallinan
My Favorite Bird
Comments: Most excellent how you bring it full-circle. Also love the O.C.D. elements in your character in the beginning. Lots of elements packed in, excellent.
Comments: Initial description of love-interest very well done. Depth of emotion is heartfelt and moving. Excellent.